Tuesday, December 04, 2007

Thats the vacuum in my LIFE !!

Feelings are lost, Vigor is dead
I lay there straight, stitched by threads
Day is short, nights seem long
Trudging life , Ends the song
Pallid stars, life is blue
Soul shrieks, but that is true
..thats the vacuum in my life

Keys are struck, but result is void
Mind jiggles, expression devoid
Books lay open, no reader to read
Words scribbled, no meaning they lead
Lights glare, eyes flinch
Divulging spirits, hard they pinch
.... thats the vacuum in my life

Love prevails, liaisons curtailed
Senses so strong, the manner derailed
Unearthly touch, bodies dispel
Whispers so sensuous, no time to tell
Trysts which titillate, places vanished
Time no bar, 'The MAN' banished
.... thats the vacuum in my life

Expectations so high, no courage to face
Plenty to do, mind hooked with a lace
Achievements are many, habit evades
Knowledge brims, desires pervade
Talent enough, determination on crutches
Anxious heart, situation blushes
.... thats the vacuum in my life

Mates so sweet, ego sours
Eyes shine, but a tear which pours
Nature benign, life departs
Lots to see, things apart
Healthy body, but in the form of corpse
Water spills, in the form of drops
... thats the vacuum in my life

7 comments:

EvilSlim said...

Well, well, well.. what do we have here?

Now THAT was impressive. I wish I could write like that!! There was rhyme, a tinge of rhythm too. Though the poem itself sounded a little amateur, you, Anshul, are here to stay.

Keep up the good work. And if there be any improvements, then I would love if there were an prologue so that we know what you are talking about better. All said and done, I have to admit, I am waiting for ur next post.

Cheerz.

M3 said...

Two words
Vacuum Sucks :(

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